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The Gift (The Chronicles of Tucker Littlefield, #1)

29965285SYNOPSIS: Tucker Littlefield is a lair, a thief, a con-man . In an attempt to take advantage of a party thrown by the King, he becomes involved in a kidnapping – the King’s niece, Elizabeth, to be exact. Because of his fear of the dark as well as heights, and a good many other things, he finds himself stabbed and bleeding to death. To save him, a Shaman for the Jonda – Daneba – turns him into a soul bearer for the Kindred. In an effort to find Lizie, Littlefield finds the Norha instead and their leader Tahki – a cannibalistic tribe the lives under a volcano that will leave no stone unturned to find Lizie. Littlefield is blackmailed into her recovery. Will the help of his companion, Enon, help them save Lizie…and themselves?

“Transformed by a primitive magic beyond a civilized man’s understanding, I was given a horrible gift that no man should possess… It held me, twisted me, turning me at its bidding. I was enslaved by its power, compelled to devour the souls of the dead until I became the monster of my fears. I have seen things I wish never to see again. I have done things of which I wish never to speak. Yet I must if I am to find the answers to fulfill my hope. I have walked upon blue ribbons of molten stone to peer into the depth of a man’s soul. I watched as a promise made at birth brought my friend Enon to sacrifice everything to become whole again – all in an effort to save the life of his child. I have cried without shame for the loss of all I hold dear and for fear that the future will hold more than I can bear. I am Tucker Littlefield. Know all that I say now is true-spoken.”

REVIEW: I found this work to be rather strange. Now, that may really work for some folks. It reads more like that of an historical recollection of a person who came in contact with some kind of ancient and savage tribe and reminded me of some old western movies where native Americans practice their strange mysticism using some kind of hallucinating potion with fire, smoke, and weird dreams in the mix.

There are some pretty good scenes in the story, but there is very little character development.

I became lost and confused in the story far too often causing me to put it down for a while with the hope that it might make sense when I returned to it and read a little further. Sometimes it worked, others, no.

I believe the problem lies in the lack of phraseology. There are simply too many phrases in this work that could be interpreted different ways. Interpret one or two the wrong way, and one becomes utterly confused. I would recommend getting an editor to get those phrases sorted… Three stars.

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Kev is an Author & Songwriter. After years of studying, and even more years working in education, and management in the US, he returned to his hometown in England where he finally settled down to focus on his writing and music. Links to his works can be found in the widget bar, and more information about them can be found on his pages above. He would greatly appreciate it if you would check them out. Kev has a M.Ed in Secondary Education with English as his main subject area. He also did post-graduate studies in Christian Counselling and Psychopathology after obtaining a BA in Psychology with a minor in Classical Greek.

2 comments on “The Gift (The Chronicles of Tucker Littlefield, #1)

  1. Thanks, Mae. When I get stomped in a book, I try to figure out why, especially if it happens a number of times. Sometimes it’s just me not really getting into it and I don’t knock a book for that if it’s well-written. Other times certain things stick out like a sore thumb. As you know, I have a margin for errors before I feel the need to mention anything untoward in a review. And, unfortunately that has to effect my rating as well.

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  2. A thoughtful review!

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