The Dragon of Time
The story is basically about a mercenary called, Scar who is tricked into fighting for his enemies while searching for the truth of his identity. In a world and time where men fight in the name of their gods, dragons pose as Gods to be reckoned with.
The premise and setting kind of reminds me of Conan or Kull which is all well and good except there is a general lack of real character development which kind of lets it down a lot. The story-line, while okay lacks depth and is somewhat mediocre. This is probably due to over use of the passive voice. I think more character development and added pace to the storyline and less reliance on the passive would greatly improve it overall.